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MyShirley Posted 20 years ago
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0Based on my student-centered concepts, I, as a music teacher, would like to promote music as a senior subject in 00secondary schools in this research. 02br
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0How does this sound?--02br
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01font00As a student-centered music teacher, I would like, in this research, to promote music as a senior subject in secondary schools.02font0-
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01cite10Davkett12cite10How does this sound?--12br
11font10As a student-centered music teacher, I would like, in this research, to promote music as a senior subject in secondary schools12font12blockquote
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01cite10Paco200412cite10What does "a senior subject" mean? 12blockquote
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0 Hello MyShirley02br
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00My try is as below. But I am not sure this is what you want to say.02br
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00As a student-oriented/centered music teacher, I hope my research could be of some help in encouraging/promoting the inclusion of music in secondary school senior students' curricula.02br
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