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MyShirley Posted 20 years ago
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0Although 00 went through the toughest war periods, the national government still put a great deal of emphasis on music education, using music as the media to develop personal accomplishments.02br
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12br 12br 10Thanks12br 12br 12blockquote 10Hello MyShirley02br 02br 00I think your sentence is correct grammatically, but it's a bit difficult for me to take what you are intending to mean by the sentence. 02br 02br 00paco 0-

— Paco2004

  • 12br 12br 10Thanks12br 12br 12blockquote 10Hello MyShirley02br 02br 00I think your sentence is correct grammatically, but it's a bit difficult for me to take what you are intending to mean by the sentence.
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01cite10MyShirley12cite10Although China went through the toughest war periods, the national government still put a great deal of emphasis on music education, using music as the media to develop personal accomplishments.12br
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0 I'm not sure, but I think this is what you want to say.02br
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01i00Even through the most difficult periods of war, the national government of China continued to put a great deal of emphasis on music education, using music as a means of promoting the students' sense of personal accomplishment.02i02br
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01i00Even through the most difficult periods of war, the national government of China continued to put a great deal of emphasis on music education, using music as a 01font00medium for personal development02font00.02i0-
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