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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Rewrite these sentences to make sense

That is not to say that you too know of the very ways by which the attainment of power can be known to all but yourself, no? So, please do rid yourself of your impertinent behaviour, and enlighten the master and I to the arcane ways of old; those which were harnessed by our creators themselves when they forged us into being. It is these very powers that I shall use to reignite the dormant magic within this staff of mine, though I fear this magic may have long since become inert – useless; if so, then are options are numbered, and we may find ourselves incapable of fighting you know what, but a part of my trusts in the capabilities of your good friend. Casting his ill-temperament aside, he is certainly physically able, more so than your father, which bodes well for our cause, as strength is an asset that may prove invaluable to us when we are to be alongside your brother, assisting him in the battle of Laurencia.

Rewrite these sentences in better English please!
  

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Why? What's wrong with this English? Clive

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Why? What's wrong with this English?

Clive
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I am not sure when to use a semi colon and when not to use one, and use a full stop instead.
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Here is a good and comprehensive discussion of semi-colons.
https://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/Semicolons.html

Let me add this broad personal comment. When a semi-colon is used to connect t

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