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The rates of diagnosis of ductal carcinoma in situ (DCIS) have risen since 1980 in women 40 and over with the introduction of screening mammography. As women under 40 years of age are not recommended for routine screening, the increase in rates of DCIS have not been seen in this age group. In situ rates increase with age in young women and the rates for White women are larger than for Black women.
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There are three sentences. It should be "In-situ rates". I would not capitalize "black" and "white", but a case could be made, I guess.
- There are three sentences.
- It should be "In-situ rates".
- I would not capitalize "black" and "white", but a case could be made, I guess.
- I would change "larger" to "greater", but that is a minor, debatable point.
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There are three sentences.
It should be "In-situ rates".
I would not capitalize "black" and "white", but a case could be made, I guess.
I would change "larger" to "greater", but that is a minor, debatable point.
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