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Panda zany 787 Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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hi can someone help me rewrite too many words. i want clear and unnecessary meaning.

“We need to make our writing clear, and make our point, so the reader can immediately see why he or she is reading our document. The reason why they might be reading is because they have to take control of a decision that they will have to make. That is that they are getting paid for, to take an action. The more time and effort they they take reading our paper the less valuable time they will have to do their job.”


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“We need to make our writing clear, so the reader can immediately see our point. They might be reading it because they have to make a decision. They are paid to act.

  • “We need to make our writing clear, so the reader can immediately see our point.
  • They might be reading it because they have to make a decision.
  • They are paid to act.
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“We need to make our writing clear, so the reader can immediately see our point. They might be reading it because they have to make a decision. They are paid to act. The more time they take to read, the less time they have to do the rest of their job.”

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