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Lgen Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Rewording a sentence to be gramatically correct

OK, below is my sentence, but it's wrong in it's use of "one". How would I correct this?

I think without realistic goals, one will not accomplish much and only hurt one's moral with one's shortcomings.
  

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Hi, OK, below is my sentence, but it's wrong in it's use of "one". How would I correct this? I think without realistic goals, one will not accomplish much and only hurt one's moral e by one's shortcomings.

  • Hi, OK, below is my sentence, but it's wrong in it's use of "one".
  • How would I correct this?
  • I think without realistic goals, one will not accomplish much and only hurt one's moral e by one's shortcomings.
  • It's basically OK for grammar.
  • For style, it's not good to repeat 'one' so much.
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Hi,

OK, below is my sentence, but it's wrong in it's use of "one". How would I correct this?

I think without realistic goals, one will not accomplish much and only hurt one's morale by one's shortcomings. It's basically OK for grammar. For style, it's not good to repeat 'one' so much. How about

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