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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Rewording a sentence

is there a decent way i can reword this sentence?
Seychelles is a place where cultures blend and people of all races have lived through everything together; a country who is struggling to pull a thriving economy together.
any help would be amazing! thank you.
-Carolyn
  

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Seyschelles is a place where one can see the blending of different cultures and having people of many/all races who have lived through everything together; a country which is unitedly fighting to maintain a thriving economy.

— Vsuresh

  • Seyschelles is a place where one can see the blending of different cultures and having people of many/all races who have lived through everything together; a country which is unitedly fighting to maintain a thriving economy.
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Seyschelles is a place where one can see the blending of different cultures and having people of many/all races who have lived through everything together; a country which is unitedly fighting to maintain a thriving economy.
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I would like to make a mistake I have committed:
Seyschelles is a place where one can see a blending of different cultures and a palce where people of many/all races live through everything together; a country which is unitedly fighting to maintain a thriving economy.
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I'm afraid it is 'correct' not 'make' mistake.

I express my apologies for the confusion I have caused.
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