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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Reword the sentence to be more effective

1. The pizza was terrible.

2. Public speaking can be exciting.

3. the heterogeneous natur of this year's entering fresman class is an onerous bruden for these speaking to market goods and services to them.

4. It was found tht there was a mouse, which was the cause of the nightime noises.

5. The femal victim was really brutally killed and murdered.
  

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Hi, I have two comments. First, it's better if you try first. Then we will be happy to help you with advice.

  • Hi, I have two comments.
  • First, it's better if you try first.
  • Then we will be happy to help you with advice.
  • Second, 'please' is an extremely important word in English culture, although perhaps in your culture it is not.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

I have two comments.

First, it's better if you try first. Then we will be happy to help you with advice.

Second, 'please' is an extremely important word in English culture, although perhaps in your culture it is not.

Best wishes, Clive

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