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Bbser Posted 16 years ago
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Life expectancy at birth, for example, was higher among the more economically developed countries. Japan reported the highest life expectancy, 78. This was followed by Canada, 76; Peru, 51; and Zaire, 47.
May I use your help to rephrase the last sentence so that it reads better? Thanks a lot.
May I use your help to rephrase the last sentence so that it reads better? Thanks a lot.
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It's basically OK, bbser, but you don't need so much punctuation: Life expectancy at birth, for example, was higher among the more economically developed countries. Japan reported the highest life expectancy at 78 , followed by Canada (76), Peru (51), and Zaire (47) .
- It's basically OK, bbser, but you don't need so much punctuation: Life expectancy at birth, for example, was higher among the more economically developed countries.
- Japan reported the highest life expectancy at 78 , followed by Canada (76), Peru (51), and Zaire (47) .
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It's basically OK, bbser, but you don't need so much punctuation:
Life expectancy at birth, for example, was higher among the more economically developed countries. Japan reported the highest life expectancy at 78, followed by Canada (76), Peru (51), and Zaire (47).
Life expectancy at birth, for example, was higher among the more economically developed countries. Japan reported the highest life expectancy at 78, followed by Canada (76), Peru (51), and Zaire (47).
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