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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

revolve around

Is this sentence natural with the word 'revolve'?

My day revolves around this show. No matter what I'm doing at 5pm and go home to watch the show. 

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Change 'and' to 'I' and both sentences are natural. I'd also avoid repetition by changing 'to watch the show' to 'to watch it'.

  • Change 'and' to 'I' and both sentences are natural.
  • I'd also avoid repetition by changing 'to watch the show' to 'to watch it'.
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Change 'and' to 'I' and both sentences are natural.

I'd also avoid repetition by changing 'to watch the show' to 'to watch it'.

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