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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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revolve around
Is this sentence natural with the word 'revolve'?
My day revolves around this show. No matter what I'm doing at 5pm and go home to watch the show.
Thank you
My day revolves around this show. No matter what I'm doing at 5pm and go home to watch the show.
Thank you
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Change 'and' to 'I' and both sentences are natural. I'd also avoid repetition by changing 'to watch the show' to 'to watch it'.
- Change 'and' to 'I' and both sentences are natural.
- I'd also avoid repetition by changing 'to watch the show' to 'to watch it'.
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Change 'and' to 'I' and both sentences are natural.
I'd also avoid repetition by changing 'to watch the show' to 'to watch it'.
I'd also avoid repetition by changing 'to watch the show' to 'to watch it'.
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