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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Revolt

Please check out the following sentence.

It was not possible to think of such things without a revolt of his whole being.
  

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Hi, Please check out the following sentence. It was not possible to think of such things without a revolt of his whole being. It's not wrong, but a little odd to my ear.

  • Hi, Please check out the following sentence.
  • It was not possible to think of such things without a revolt of his whole being.
  • It's not wrong, but a little odd to my ear.
  • I prefer It was not possible to think of such things without his whole being revolting.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Please check out the following sentence.

It was not possible to think of such things without a revolt of his whole being.

It's not wrong, but a little odd to my ear. I prefer

It was not possible to think of such things without his whole being revolting.

Clive

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