Revision of a job application Cover Letter.

Hello,

I have came accross your web site and I would like, if possible, to obtain a feedback on my cover letter to
 an IT+Business position. If you need more details please let me know.

Thank you in advance for your help.

Regards,
F.

CoverLetter:

[My Full Name]

[My Address]

[My cell phone number]

[My email address]

Subject: Application to the [position name] – position with reference number [ref number]

Dear Mr. [Last Name],

I have finished my Master Degree in [Course name] at [University Name] with an average of [my grade] out of [maximum grade]. 
My degree offers an extensive portfolio of courses covering software design, software development, 
network protocols & networks, team & project management and business studies. 

I have balanced my studies with professional experiences in software development and systems integration.
In relation to the [position name] position, I have experience in the analysis of business processes, in the mapping of those
processes to software and deployment of complex IT infrastructures. 

As a Business Analyst at [company name], I was responsible for the deployment of a system to manage the company’s 
[activity number1], [activity number 2] and [activity number3]. I was involved in the analysis of business processes, in the design, programming 
and roll-out of the system. 
As a Network Engineer at [Company Name], I was responsible for the development of a wide scale network
infrastructure (N sites, M international).
This project involved learning about the previous existing solution, analyzing and testing every component, identifying integration 
issues and deploying the adopted technologies. Furthermore, this project implied the creation of
 Load Balancing Techniques and Recovery/ Management Procedures.
In the addition to the above I was the intermediary between the development team and the several internal customers of both 
projects developing communication and leadership skills. 

My peers recognize me as a hard-working element, creative and proactive with the ability to develop new expertise in a short 
period of time. I am equally recognized for my ability to apply efficient strategies to the situations that I face and when working 
in a team I contribute with ideas and support to all team members.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully, 

[My Name]