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00Around 3:30 pm yesterday afternoon, a robbery occurred at the downtown First Federal Bank. Two robbers raided it and stole 3 million NT dollars. According to the police investigation, both robbers wore sunglasses, face masks and helmets. They were all about the same height, around 175 centimeters tall. One of them had black straight hair while the other one had an unusual dyed blond curly hair. Both of them had black jackets on and their pants were all in blue. The plump-looking robber wore a pair of white sneakers, and the sandals were worn by the skinny one. After robbing the bank, they ran away on their motorcycle and disappeared at the street corner within 30 seconds. Fortunately no one was hurt in this incident. This is the second robbery case reported this year by the city police.0-