Revision for a petition

Hello, my name is Marie and Ive been writing a text for a petition . Im french and ive been trying to find someone who could revise for me and help me upgrade the structure of the text... If anyone is willing to help. I guess a little knowing of the situation could help but it's a little precise...

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Signing to this petition means that you engage yourself to send an email to SEGA with the following statement on a date and time that will be decided in the near future. This is not a complaing movement but a way to show SEGA how much fans still care but have been deceived for various reasons by their recent outing and think the company deserve an honest revision of their policy, marketing, services, development method, etc.

The content of the email would go like this:
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Each time you make a customer happy, God saves a kitten.

for more information on this movement, visit www.helpsavesega.com
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A webpage will put online to explain the details of this movement.

Our goal is to send them thousands of small e-mails and catch their attention. More information will be send to you if we judge that enough people have signed in, that's why you need a valid e-mail address. Your e-mail adress won't be displayed nor will we use it for any other purpose. The content of the final e-mail might also be revised.

Note that if you are willing to collaborate with us on this project, you should contact via the author e-mail.

I sincerely hope that all of you will participate and help make a difference for what we care.

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Thanks in advance