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Gillyflower Posted 10 years ago
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Could you please review the sentence below?
"Besides, dietary pattern is related to at least 35% of cancer incidence; and of 65% of the other factors, obesity and overweight contribute 5% and drinking alcohol contributes 3% to cancer."
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Could you please review the sentence below?
"Besides, dietary pattern is related to at least 35% of cancer incidence; and of 65% of the other factors, obesity and overweight contribute 5% and drinking alcohol contributes 3% to cancer."
Thank you!
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Thirty-five percent of cancer incidences are related to dietary patterns; of the remaining 65% of cancer incidences, only 5% are related to obesity and being overweight, and 3% are related to alcohol consumption,
- Thirty-five percent of cancer incidences are related to dietary patterns; of the remaining 65% of cancer incidences, only 5% are related to obesity and being overweight, and 3% are related to alcohol consumption,
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Thirty-five percent of cancer incidences are related to dietary patterns; of the remaining 65% of cancer incidences, only 5% are related to obesity and being overweight, and 3% are related to alcohol consumption,
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