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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Vocabulary

revision

Is it OK to say analyses and revision pf experiences?

Thanks

p.s. The context: One of the components of negotiating system is organizational level which comprises: strategic process, team approach, technology and revision/review of experiences and sharing knowledge.
  

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Hi, 'Revision' suggests change, and you can't change an experience you have had, as it's in the past. I'd prefer to say 'review'. Best wishes, Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, 'Revision' suggests change, and you can't change an experience you have had, as it's in the past.
  • I'd prefer to say 'review'.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

'Revision' suggests change, and you can't change an experience you have had, as it's in the past. I'd prefer to say 'review'.

Best wishes, Clive
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He's right... I'd change it to 'review' too...
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Thank you very much
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