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Itman Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Revising an article abstract

Hello,
I wrote the following paragraph as an abstract for my project.Is it possible to take a look at it and tell me whether it is correct grammaticaly.

The high hope of accomplishing calmness and comfort in the great future cuases the world around of us is being evolved too much faster.Meanwhile, engineering sciences particularly electronic engineering like other sciences has made considerable changes and advancementsin our daily life.
In recent decades,since telecommunication between various electronic branches has had considerable advancements-new approaches in transmitting information and presenting knowledge-which has been the main focus of experts attention.
Moreover,Wireless communication owing to sizable advantages such as ease in use,reduction in costs and overcoming to important obstacles is in the center of their attention more than before.In this project we've tried to transmit information via Infrared as a transmittion based and according to IrDA standard protocol.The project in next phases can be lead to design and manufacture devices that are used to ease wireless communication based on IrDa.


Thank you very much in advance.
  

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would you please do that.

  • would you please do that.
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would you please do that.

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