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Redhaired Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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** Important.. Please help me corrrect any incorrect grammar/sentences. I'm so sorry for the urgency, I thought the dealine was later.
When you were a baby you amazed me with every breath you took. Your determination to survive was endless. You were an answered prayer.
When you were a toddler you amazed me with every sound you made, every word you spoke, every step you took and every smile you smiled. I couldn’t have been more proud of you.
When you were a young boy you impressed me with your strong-mindedness and confidence. You were my pride and Joy.
When you were a teenager you impressed me with your independence, sense of humor, caring nature and lightheartedness. You were my little man.
You’ve grown into an exceptional young man, Nicholas, with such compassion, love and respect for others. You have no limits on how much. Your strong leadership abilities, dedication and caring nature (have) has brought you many opportunities, wonderful people and much success and will continue to (bring you) throughout your next journey in life. You always strive to do your best. You have a lot to be proud of.
You will always be my “Ray of Sunshine”.
Love always, Mom
Hey Nick - Honk Honk! Heads Up
I’m proud of you but look out for parked vans! Your biggest Fans -
Love ya bro, Andrew Sammy and Baby Buddy
When you were a baby you amazed me with every breath you took. Your determination to survive was endless. You were an answered prayer.
When you were a toddler you amazed me with every sound you made, every word you spoke, every step you took and every smile you smiled. I couldn’t have been more proud of you.
When you were a young boy you impressed me with your strong-mindedness and confidence. You were my pride and Joy.
When you were a teenager you impressed me with your independence, sense of humor, caring nature and lightheartedness. You were my little man.
You’ve grown into an exceptional young man, Nicholas, with such compassion, love and respect for others. You have no limits on how much. Your strong leadership abilities, dedication and caring nature (have) has brought you many opportunities, wonderful people and much success and will continue to (bring you) throughout your next journey in life. You always strive to do your best. You have a lot to be proud of.
You will always be my “Ray of Sunshine”.
Love always, Mom
Hey Nick - Honk Honk! Heads Up
I’m proud of you but look out for parked vans! Your biggest Fans -
Love ya bro, Andrew Sammy and Baby Buddy
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My suggestions: You’ve grown into an exceptional young man, Nicholas, with such compassion, love and respect for others , with no limits on how much. Your strong leadership abilities, dedication and caring nature have brought you many opportunities, wonderful people and much success and will continue to (bring you) throughout your next journey in life. You always strive to do your best.
- My suggestions: You’ve grown into an exceptional young man, Nicholas, with such compassion, love and respect for others , with no limits on how much.
- Your strong leadership abilities, dedication and caring nature have brought you many opportunities, wonderful people and much success and will continue to (bring you) throughout your next journey in life.
- You always strive to do your best.
- You have much to be proud of.
- Beautifully written- I would be proud to present such a composition to my son!
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My suggestions:
You’ve grown into an exceptional young man, Nicholas, with such compassion, love and respect for others, with no limits on how much. Your strong leadership abilities, dedication and caring nature have brought you many opportunities, wonderful people and much success and will continue t
You’ve grown into an exceptional young man, Nicholas, with such compassion, love and respect for others, with no limits on how much. Your strong leadership abilities, dedication and caring nature have brought you many opportunities, wonderful people and much success and will continue t
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Thank you so much for the compliment and for your timely reply. It's taken me 2 days to put it all together and is due tomorrow. He is my last in high school.
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