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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

revise this short reply

would you please revise this letter.Thanks in advance.

Dear Mr Meloni
Thank you for your consideration in relation to belated catalogues. Since we haven’t had any change of address and there is no FedEx service in Iraq, using DHL service which has an official office in Baghdad is recommended.
Looking forward to hearing from you

Ofcourse I am going to reply this letter:
Thank you very much for your email. As we checked Fedex, they said they have no service in Baghdad. So you didn't receive our catalogue which we sent on Mar 27. Would you be able to inform us another address so that we could send you catalogue by Fedex again?
  

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Dear Mr Meloni, Thank you for your consideration regarding the catalogues. Since we haven’t had any change of address and there is no FedEx service in Iraq, using DHL service , which has an official office in Baghdad , is recommended. We are looking forward to hearing from you

  • Dear Mr Meloni, Thank you for your consideration regarding the catalogues.
  • Since we haven’t had any change of address and there is no FedEx service in Iraq, using DHL service , which has an official office in Baghdad , is recommended.
  • We are looking forward to hearing from you
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Dear Mr Meloni,

Thank you for your consideration regarding the catalogues. Since we haven’t had any change of address and there is no FedEx service in Iraq, using DHL service, which has an official office in Baghdad, is recommended.

We are looking forward to hearing from you

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