Revise my scolarship essay please

First I would like to express my appreciation for this opportunity to apply for XXX scholarship.

Since I was in Secondary school I had two dreams: to learn English and to become a teacher. Therefore, when I graduated from a school and had to choose my future profession, I decided to enter the Belarusian State University and become a teacher of two languages - English and German. I choose Computer Methods of Language Teaching as my specialization for following reasons:
- teaching profession is one of the most respectful in my country
- Knowledge of English and computer methods opens up new horizons and new opportunities
- To be an english teacher means for me to contribute myself to education of people
With the background knowledge I have in pedagogics and methods for language teaching, I strongly feel that a master programme in Teaching English to Speakers of Other Languages will be very relevant to my practice back here in my country Belarus. I plan to work as a English teacher at one of the educational center in Minsk, to open my own language school for children and contribute myself in development of educational spere of my country.

Owing to limited resources, I have not been able to proceed with further studies in Belarus or abroad, as I had been studying for five years at Belarusian State University on a paid basis and I lack the necessary funds. I would be very grateful to be provided with scholarship to further my education and to get Master Degree at Westminster University that will help me to gain new skills, become a great professional and to achieve my goals.

Moreover. I believe that I will have chance through scholarship to interact with students with different cultural and professional backgrounds all over the world. The interaction of people, their thoughts and ideas is important because it helps to solve different global problems and to contribute to development of our world in different aspects. Without interaction there is no chance to build up better future for new generations.

Finally, I am determined to make the most out of scholarship benefits. I will acquire new knowledge in the sphere of teaching English, polish my communicational, organizational, leadership and analytical skills and gain new ideas in order to apply it when I return in Belarus and to contribute myself to improvement of educational system of my country. I think, that English teaching in my country is not productive enough because of the lack of teachers' qualification, knowledge and new methods. I think that Master of Science in Teaching English to Speakers of Other Languages is needed in Belarus in order to bring changes and innovations to educational system.