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Mkcar1 Posted 16 years ago
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Revise each of the following sentences to improve readability, style, or mechanics
I need to revise this sentence and want to know if I have it right.
Was it Franklin who said plough deep while sluggards sleep.
would I write it this way?
Franklin was thought to have said plough deep while sluggards sleep
Was it Franklin who said plough deep while sluggards sleep.
would I write it this way?
Franklin was thought to have said plough deep while sluggards sleep
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Hi, I need to revise this sentence and want to know if I have it right. Was it Franklin who said plough deep while sluggards sleep. would I write it this way?
- Hi, I need to revise this sentence and want to know if I have it right.
- Was it Franklin who said plough deep while sluggards sleep.
- would I write it this way?
- Franklin was thought to have said plough deep while sluggards sleep In what way do you want to revise it?
- How about this?
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Hi,
I need to revise this sentence and want to know if I have it right.
Was it Franklin who said plough deep while sluggards sleep.
would I write it this way?
Franklin was thought to have said plough deep while sluggards sleep
In what way do you want to revise it?
How about this?
I need to revise this sentence and want to know if I have it right.
Was it Franklin who said plough deep while sluggards sleep.
would I write it this way?
Franklin was thought to have said plough deep while sluggards sleep
In what way do you want to revise it?
How about this?
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