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Bsobaid Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
review the sentence
Please review the sentence for my assignment about an investment company.
"The company has set a minimum amount of investment level for the investors to invest and only those individuals or investment companies fulfilling the company’s criteria are allowed or are invited to invest."
"The company has set a minimum amount of investment level for the investors to invest and only those individuals or investment companies fulfilling the company’s criteria are allowed or are invited to invest."
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It's a bit complicated at the moment. Too much unecessary repetition. The company has set a minimum investment level, and only individuals or investment companies complying with this are allowed to invest.
- It's a bit complicated at the moment.
- Too much unecessary repetition.
- The company has set a minimum investment level, and only individuals or investment companies complying with this are allowed to invest.
- Even simpler.
- There is a minimum level of investment required.
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It's a bit complicated at the moment. Too much unecessary repetition.
The company has set a minimum investment level, and only individuals or investment companies complying with this are allowed to invest.
Even simpler.
There is a minimum level of investment required.
The company has set a minimum investment level, and only individuals or investment companies complying with this are allowed to invest.
Even simpler.
There is a minimum level of investment required.
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