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Bsobaid Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Review the paragraph

Hello Forum,

Please review the following sentences for me:

"With more than 100 employees, cluster management is continuously working towards enhancing the efficiency of project management practices that could ensure optimum utilization of public resources."

Any suggestion/comments would be highly appreciated.

Thanks
  

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Hi bsobaid, I find the sentence semantically odd. Cluster management (with more than 100 employees) is working towards enhancing efficiency?

— Julielai

  • Hi bsobaid, I find the sentence semantically odd.
  • Cluster management (with more than 100 employees) is working towards enhancing efficiency?
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Hi bsobaid,

I find the sentence semantically odd. Cluster management (with more than 100 employees) is working towards enhancing efficiency?
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