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Goldenboy1 Posted 6 years ago
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Can you please review my text? Also, can you let me know if the comma is in the first sentence is optional?

Please contact Keith, who will be able to help you install your immersion heater. As advised, he has installed a lot of them in the development. He will also be happy to answer all your queries

  

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Goldenboy1 Can you please review my text? Also, can you let me know if the comma is in the first sentence is optional? Please contact Keith, who will be able to help you install your immersion heater.

  • Goldenboy1 Can you please review my text?
  • Also, can you let me know if the comma is in the first sentence is optional?
  • Please contact Keith, who will be able to help you install your immersion heater.
  • As advised, he has installed a lot of them in the development.
  • He will also be happy to answer all your queries .
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Goldenboy1

Can you please review my text? Also, can you let me know if the comma is in the first sentence is optional?

Please contact Keith, who will be able to help you install your immersion heater. As advised, he has installed a lot of them in the development. He will also be happy to answer all your queries.

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