Review of my statement to the hiring manager
Please, I need someone to check my paragraph. Is it Coherently?
I am over the moon by applying in the field of mechanical engineering at CERN. I have worked on several projects in mechanical engineering and my tasks included:
- Designing mechanical systems using SolidWorks, analyzing those using ANSYS, manufacturing these systems and assembling them.
- Simulating the interactions between these systems and the human body using CATIA V5 in the ergonomic analysis.
One of these projects is designing and assembling environmentally friendly and autonomous cars that participate in worldwide competitions.
I’ve completed several projects using the programming languages such as MATLAB and C++ and some of these projects are:
- Writing MATLAB code for the automated cashier in the shopping shops using the greedy algorithm
- Solving the differential equations and studying the effect of their parameters in the solution.
- Designing and simulating of a differential Amplifier circuit using Simulink and Simscape.
Top answer
It is coherent, not coherently. Lose the drama of "over the moon". You are applying for a job, not a part in a musical.
- It is coherent, not coherently.
- Lose the drama of "over the moon".
- You are applying for a job, not a part in a musical.
- I would research writing resumes.
- There are several sites that can help you with the proper format.
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It is coherent, not coherently.
Lose the drama of "over the moon". You are applying for a job, not a part in a musical.
I would research writing resumes. There are several sites that can help you with the proper format. Then repost here for grammar assistance.
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