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MarieAndree1541 Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Review of my cover letter

Hello,

I was wondering if someone could proofread my cover letter please:

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Dear Madam Smith,

I would like to express my interest in the Art Worker / Production Artist position as advertised on Indeed’s website. I am confident that I am the perfect candidate for this position.

Thanks to my rich and varied experience, I am proficient in various types of graphic design work, including website templates, logo creation, and marketing materials like flyers and brochures. As I was reading the task description of the posted job, I became increasingly interested. I like to have different tasks to accomplish and keep busy. I also quickly adapt to the work methods and routines of my employers and I am a fast and motivated learner. I am also familiar with corporate design as when I was working at Eden Textile, I had to follow the company’s brand.

In addition to my applicable training, I have attributes that would make me an asset to your company. These qualities include: a knack for working both independently and as a team player, the ability to meet deadlines, and a character that is approachable, yet hardworking and self-sufficient.

As for my salary expectations, it would fall in the $ __/hour range, as it is the average according by the Canadian payscale’s website.

I thank you for your time and consideration, and I hope to speak with you further about my qualifications. Please see my enclosed resume, and also feel free to view my online portfolio at www.abcd.com"

Thank you!
Marie
  

Top answer

Dear Madam Smith, ( Ms . ) I would like to express my interest in the Art Worker / Production Artist position as advertised on Indeed’s website. I am confident that I am the perfect candidate for this position.

  • Dear Madam Smith, ( Ms .
  • ) I would like to express my interest in the Art Worker / Production Artist position as advertised on Indeed’s website.
  • I am confident that I am the perfect candidate for this position.
  • ) , logo s creation , and marketing materials like flyers and brochures.
  • As I was reading the task description of the posted job, I became increasingly interested.
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Dear Madam Smith, (Ms. would be a more modern salutation.)

I would like to express my interest in the Art Worker / Production Artist position as advertised on Indeed’s website. I am confident that I am the perfect candidate for this position.

Thanks to my rich and varied experience, I am proficient in various types of g
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Thank you!
Marie


A more suitable and business-like ending is

Yours sincerely,
Marie Smith
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That is good to know. Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Marie

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