Review my letter for IELTS (Academic)

Your local college is organizing an event on the International Student’s Day and is looking for people to talk about their country. Write a letter and say

- What topics would you like them to cover?

- Why would it be interesting for students?

- Ask questions about the arrangements.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this later that our college is celebrating an occasion on the International Student’s Day and they are seeking the people to talk about their country.

I would like to cover the Chinese language and their dressings. The reason to talk on this topic is that we have many Chinese students in our college through which we can make them happy.

Not only students, their parents also learn about the Chinese culture which is spreading in our country. This will increase their knowledge and entice them to read more about the history of china which is the second leading country in the economy after America.

As you know that arrangement matters a lot, I would love to know that when and where this event will be organized. Last time, people did not come on the concert of college due to heavy traffic on our college road.

I await your prompt response.

Yours sincerely,

x.y.z