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Letter Of Motivation

Dear Sir or Madam,
I Am Applying To Your Fulltime Master’s Program in International Business And Management, Starting This Winter Semester.
Since I Have Been Working As An Accounts Manager And Financial Advisor I Have A Good Grip In Finance, I Have Been Working For The Past Three Years With A Chartered Accountant, Now That I Have Relevant Experience In This Field, I Want To Move Forward To A More Managerial Role And Gain Experience At A Global Level And Know How The World Thinks, What Other Minds From All Around The World Know, How They Operate, And Contribute My Bit In It. This Is The Main Reason Why I Have Chosen This Course, This Course Will Give Me International Exposure At The Highest Level, Studying And Interacting With The Brightest Minds From All Around The World Will Provide Me With A Valuable Experience And Knowledge, My Main Focus Is To Learn And Learning In A Country Which Is Renowned For Quality And The Highest Level Of Discipline Will Help Me Become More Efficient At All Levels.
Since My Childhood I Have Been Wanting To Become An Entrepreneur, Growing Up In A Business Family I All Ways Had A Job Security, That I Could One Day Join My Family Business, But I Was Determined To Start My Own Business, That Does Not Relate To My Family Business. When I Was In College I Thought I Should Know About Other Fields Of Business, So I Started Working With A Chartered Accountant, I Handled Clients With Different Business Back Grounds And I Learnt The Overall Economic And Future Relevance Of These Businesses, I Came To Know That The Best Business That Is Sustainable And Prospect full, Is In The Field Of Renewable Energy, Since My Country Does Not Have Such Resources, Knowledge And Infrastructure, Which Is Required, I Need To Think Globally, And Having International Knowledge And Experience Of How Trade And Business’s Work In A Developed Country Would Really Benefit Me To Put My Idea Into Action, And Start My Own Business, So In Ten Years I See My Self As A Successful Businessman.
The Accomplishments That I Want Share With You Are As Follows, I Have Studied At A Very Renowned University In Punjab Which Is One Of The Best In My country, On The Academic Front I Have Been Good And Understand Every Thing That Was Taught To Me, But I Am More Of A Practical Person I Try To Implement Things On My Own, I Don’t Think That If It Is Written In The Book It Must Be The Only Way To Do It, I Like Experimenting, Making My Own Decisions, Go With My Vision And Insight, Sometimes It Works And Sometimes It Does Not, But I Do Not Let That Discourage Me, Because Of Such thinking I Was Selected To Work With One Of The Best Company In My City, I Am Also Very Athletic, Playing All Kinds Of Sports Since My Childhood, When I Was In School I Used To Be Very Unhealthy, But As I Got Older I Started Thinking, That This Is Not The Way To Live I Was Determined To Excel In Sports I Started Playing Football And Started Weightlifting, Worked Really Hard Every Day, And Was Really Motivated And Disciplined Never Missed The Training Session, As A Result Now I Am Really Healthy And Athletic, This Hard Work, Motivation And Discipline Helped Me Reach This Level Of Athleticism. I Know I Will Surely Succeed At Your University, I Am Fully Motivated And Will Give Everything I Have To Achieve The Greatest Results Possible. Besides From These Accomplishments, I Am Yet To Achieve My Biggest Dream Of Becoming A Successful Businessman, And Learning At An International Level Will Really Help Me Serve That Purpose.
Sincerely Yours,
Narinder Vaid.