Review My ielts writing task 1

The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The two given pie charts compare the percentage of six kinds of smart divices were used to watch TV by canadian teenagers who were in 18 to 25 years old in 2009 and 2019. The unit is measured in percent.

Overall, one notable feature is that almost the number of people using these items had a significant change over a ten year perioid.

In details, the percentage of both users using laptop and desktop computer to watch television accouted for about one - fifth of the total ( 20% and 18% in 2009 respectively) which compares to be less than in 2019, was the same percent (12%). While the number of people using mobile phone undergoes a gradual increase in after 10 years, it was about 15% to 26%.

Three devices: tablet, flat-screen TV and conventional TV were making a dramatic shift for pie charts. With regards to the amout of tablet and flat -screen TV being used, they were just 5% and 8% which were the lowest fold. Afer ten years, there were rapidly rise in 2019 ( 19% and 27% respectively). There was drammatic reduction in the latter, it was one third (34% in 2009) to one over two five (4% in 2010).