Review my Essay Letter Please

So I have an assignment for my class, and want u to judge it. Please do, here it is;

Dear Kami Garcia and Margaret Stohl,

Before I really ramble off, let me just start with a hello. Hello, my name is Lily and I’ve learned a lot. Not sure whether I would say I learned a lot from school or real life experiences because lately it’s been kind of both. I mean I guess I would say that I lean towards the “not school” experience of learning, mainly because when you learn things out of school they often mean more or have a reasoning behind why you’re learning it. It’s like learning algebra versus learning to use that program on your computer that you’ve really wanted to use, or learning a chord on a guitar or ukulele (baby guitar), or a new drawing technique, etc. It’s just kind of special, or something like that.

I know a lot, but I also don’t know a lot, my “smarts” kind of correspond with random trivia facts, or memorizing buzzfeed quiz questions (and answers) because you wanted to be the sprinkled donut not the glazed donut. While I highly doubt I’m alone in this boat, I would definitely hope we aren’t all doomed to this fate of “internet smart” intelligence.

In all reality we probably are though, or we are going to be. I can already see it, instead of learning hands on we’ll be learning screens on, or maybe not. Maybe we’ll learn about much more advanced things in the future. Maybe we’ll have more classes, or we won’t go to school in a building. There’s huge possibility that it will be the exact same as it is now, well not the exact same. I’m, sure we won’t have the same totally year 1874 box computers in our computer lab, we’ll probably have an upgrade by then!

Sincerely, Red Garfield