Review ielts writing task 2

People have different views about whether or not increasing sports facilities in order to improve society's health. As far as I can concern, I wholeheartedly believe that other effective methods should be required instead of only sports facilities.

On the one hand, the availability of sports facilities would bring back several benefits for habitants’ health. If the number of facilities increased, people would have the opportunity to access them with ease without forcing them to move far away. In this way, citizens have more motivation to enhance their health, also, doing exercise habits therefore be established more regularly in their daily life. This can be greatly exemplified by a recent report in Hanoi that more and more senior citizens are using public sports facilities since the investment on urban life quality was allocated.

On the other hand, I would argue that other compulsory alternatives are of much greater concern than sports construction. Firstly, not everyone has the same accessibility to sports facilities, in this fast paced life, almost all young citizens are living in a hustle and bustle way, their days are packed with loads of deadlines, they therefore basically do not have much free time for doing sports. Secondly, the realistic influence of solely sports facilities is negligible with the whole community. With the aim of improving society health, many worth-concerning possibilities should be implemented, such as operating required periodic health checks for one each. Another ideal method includes raising the community awareness in healthy diet and work-life balance. Lately, the effect of this is demonstrated by an eat-clean challenge among youngsters on social media, not only it helps people to have diet meals but also enhance their responsibilities with their own life.

In conclusion, for all the reasons mentioned above, however many sports facilities are constructed, I unconditionally believe that other urgent alternatives have to be put into implementation.