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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Review Cover Letter

I have written and rewritten this over and over. I don't know if it is it or me that is resulting in no response from job applications. If it is the letter, I wanted to see what could be done to fix it. If not, then apparently I have a bigger problem. ha ha...

Here it is------------------------
Hello! My name is Amanda White. I am a hard-working and enthusiastic Graphic Designer with over 16 years of experience ranging from print design to photo editing and some web work. I have worked on staff creating a wide variety of graphic design collateral for several large companies such as Texas Tech University and USA SHADE & Fabric Structures, both of which encompass several brands and departments.

As a seasoned graphic designer, my abilities and experience are far-ranging. My expertise includes designing flyers, brochures, books/catalogs, logos and packages, tradeshow collateral, sales materials, presentations, invitations, banners and a variety of other print media. High proficiency in photo editing, correction and manipulation further lends an extra level of quality in my work. I have full mastery of controlling project timelines from the first idea through conceptual development and design to the final product. Another plus is employment at a printing press. My design position also included working closely with the prepress department and I was responsible for the setup up press-ready documents.

I have expert and proficient knowledge in Adobe Photoshop, InDesign, Illustrator and Adobe Acrobat Pro.

Currently, I run my own small design freelance business located at website.com.

Thank you for taking the time to review my resume and consider me for this position. You can contact me with any questions by emailing me at Email Removed or by calling me at 123-456-7890. You can see the full scope of my portfolio at website.com.

Warmest regards.
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THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Amanda
  

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Dear [],

Hello! My name is Amanda White. I am a hard-working and enthusiastic graphic designer with over 16 years of experience ranging from print design to photo editing and some as well as web work. I have worked on staff, creating a wide variety of graphic design collateral for several large and prominent companies such as Texas
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Thank you so much! So it didn't sound too bad just needed some grammatical correction and rewrite of a concept line??

After making this post, I also tried doing a rewrite that includes using bullets to highlight my skills so you could see my finer points. It looks like this:

What can I offer (company I want to work for)?

• Expertise in print design including all marketin
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What can I offer (company I want to work for)?

• Expertise in print design including all for marketing types (brochures and flyers, advertisements, corporate identity, sales tools, presentations, tradeshow elements, invitations and more).
Solid Proper pre-press file setup - With By having press file submissions

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