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Simpleseasub Posted 13 years ago
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Review and Help me to find out grammaical error here , please help me ?
Nothing there is except tears in my eyes , the height is enormous to touch the sky ,
Lack of your presence around me, currently i'm like the bird without wings to fly .
For others its a good day , but because of you , i used to get haunted by the sun ray
and for others its cool and warm wonderful day
Others feels me im alright and okay , how they know in my heart there is pain
In your absence i only can feel same day is of bitter cold with stormy rain ............stromy rain @@@
my tears are not so cheap so i can't let it drop for a girl .....!%%%$^^*(&*
Lack of your presence around me, currently i'm like the bird without wings to fly .
For others its a good day , but because of you , i used to get haunted by the sun ray
and for others its cool and warm wonderful day
Others feels me im alright and okay , how they know in my heart there is pain
In your absence i only can feel same day is of bitter cold with stormy rain ............stromy rain @@@
my tears are not so cheap so i can't let it drop for a girl .....!%%%$^^*(&*
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There is nothing except tears in my eyes, my height so enormous as to touch the very sky. I am currently like a bird without wings, with nothing but emptiness around me. What for others was a warm, sunny day, I used to find haunting and debilitating, all because of you.
- There is nothing except tears in my eyes, my height so enormous as to touch the very sky.
- I am currently like a bird without wings, with nothing but emptiness around me.
- What for others was a warm, sunny day, I used to find haunting and debilitating, all because of you.
- They all think I am alright, but how could they know of the pain dwelling in my heart?
- In your absence, every day is bitterly cold and the stormy rain never relents.
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There is nothing except tears in my eyes, my height so enormous as to touch the very sky. I am currently like a bird without wings, with nothing but emptiness around me. What for others was a warm, sunny day, I used to find haunting and debilitating, all because of you. They all think I am alright, but how could they know of the pain dwelling in my heart? In your absence, every day is bitterly col
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Thank you so much Shattered but this is not a story , this is poem. 
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Here is my spin:
I see nothing but only tears in my eyes
The pain I felt so deep since your goodbye
I felt like a bird without the wind under my wings
My heart filled with emptiness, a long winter without spring
As people around me enjoy a warm sunny Spring day
I have only haunting memory of you day after day
People think I am alright as I try to forget and hide the pai
I see nothing but only tears in my eyes
The pain I felt so deep since your goodbye
I felt like a bird without the wind under my wings
My heart filled with emptiness, a long winter without spring
As people around me enjoy a warm sunny Spring day
I have only haunting memory of you day after day
People think I am alright as I try to forget and hide the pai
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My contribution:
There is nothing but the tears in my eyes.
The height for to touch the sky is so high.
The lack of your presence makes me like the bird without wings to fly.
For others maybe its a good day, but for me, because of you, is like I get haunted by the sun ray.
People thinks I'm fine, how can they know that my heart is full of pain.
Your absence make me fe
There is nothing but the tears in my eyes.
The height for to touch the sky is so high.
The lack of your presence makes me like the bird without wings to fly.
For others maybe its a good day, but for me, because of you, is like I get haunted by the sun ray.
People thinks I'm fine, how can they know that my heart is full of pain.
Your absence make me fe
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