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Dear Tiki’s HR department,
I’m Khanh. A Student is coming soon graduate in this May of 2018. With some experiences in Digital marketing and knowledge about Growth Hacking. I would like to apply for this position as a Growth Hacker Intern If can be.
As you can see In my CV, my internship job is working regularly with marketing tools like google analytics, Report Facebook insight, landing page..it’s all related skills and I understand how they work to start with growth hacking though I have fewer experiences
Besides that, I’m learning, executing and testing for the growth hacking day by day to improve. My major is E-commerce management and my current internship is also about the leading e-commerce platform. So I can Learn Fast, work hard to fit this position in a short time and become master like you want to train.
If you interested in my CV or my desired, please give me a chance to discuss more about me and what I can do.
Be thankful
Khanh Nguyen,
Top answer
Little Prince 96 Dear Tiki’s HR department, Not good. You write to a person or a position, not a department. Probably "Hiring Manager" Little Prince 96 I’m Khanh.
- Little Prince 96 Dear Tiki’s HR department, Not good.
- You write to a person or a position, not a department.
- Probably "Hiring Manager" Little Prince 96 I’m Khanh.
- Not good.
- First, do not use contractions in formal letters.
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Little Prince 96Dear Tiki’s HR department,
Not good. You write to a person or a position, not a department.
Probably "Hiring Manager"
Little Prince 96I’m Khanh.
Not good. First, do not use contractions in formal letters. Second, do not follow " I am" with your name.
It is very self-important.
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