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Essays (no more than 700 words): paragraphs, single spaced.

Please answer the following questions:

- Your background and/ or interests that make you competitive for this workshop.

Firstly, I really care about social activities and community development field. That’s why I used to join a forum with the name is “ Thanh niên v?i Di cu an toàn” which hold by IOM Vietnam in 2 days at Hanoi. And after the forum, I and all participants have launched a project which is Hiep si Di Cu FanPage ( you can see here: https://www.facebook.com/hiepsidicu.iom ). We organized a successful event for youth on July at UN House building.

Secondly, where I live. It is mean my village which is Bac Ninh city. It is facing problems about the wastewater from Lang Bun. Thus, I want to join this workshop to learned and apply to my village. Shared with friends all over the regions and have a real see about Mekong Delta of problems are facing.

- What do you think you can do to encourage policy makers to make changes to protect the environment in your home country?

As a youth with full of enthusiasm and creative.I always want to do things that can impact on a better way to Community. Now aday,the social network is very popular and its also the good tools to impact to policy makers by build a young community. Thus I want to launch campaings, events and slogans, online or offline

I think its a one way I can do to encourage policy makers to make changes to protect the environment in my home country

- What do you think you can do to transfer the knowledge and experience from the workshop to your friends, colleagues, and institutions?

Previously, when I joined Safety migration forum, alot of my friends are usully asked me about the forum. What is migration? And then I gave simple examples of Migration. Its related to regular daily life. Gave my friends link Fanpage that we built if they need more infomation. So they feel awesome and interest it.

Beside my knowledge, I want to share my experience, stories and real cases that i will learn from the workshop to my teacher who always encourage me in the 4 years university. My friends who always know me.Its a simple talk with group or present in front of my class.