Review a terrible situation

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It is easy to describe my best friend, so, I am going to tell you something else. a terrible situation that happened with my friend and I. One year ago, one morning, we were going into work, once we arrived there, we found something strange had happened. The lights, the windows, and the doors were broken. "What is going on?" My friend Ahmed said. I had no idea, I did not know what I had to say. The papers scattered and the general view was chaos everywhere. Ultimately, we had to ask someone because the situation was so far-fetched. So we called our boss. " This is an earthquake" Our boss said. Alongside his speaking, the building was shaking. Timely, we realized that there was an earthquake! We have been working there for two years. I did not imagine that earthquake could make as effect as what happened, did you ?!! The building was shaking like in the cartoon with out falling. It is really hard to explain, but it was like shift to the right and then shift to the left. Amazing

Review please and tell me my mistakes!!

Philip · Accepted Answer

with my friend and me

going to work; (avoid run-on sentence)

I did not know what to say

The papers were scattered

our boss (no capital letter)

While he was speaking

~~timely~~ Finally/at last

earthquake couold do as much damage as that

Did you? (new sentence)

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