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Too finicky 7 Posted 6 years ago
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Context - Every other news channels has been working against Mr William's news channel so that his news channel TRP gets affected but inspite of all their efforts Mr William came out as a winner.

Williams has taken everyone on single handedly in the race for getting maximum TRP.


  

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too finicky 7 Context - Every other news channels channel has been working against Mr William's news channel TRP so that it is adversely his news channel TRP gets affected , but inspite in spite of all their efforts Mr William came comes out as a the winner. too finicky 7 Williams has taken everyone on single - handedly in the race for getting maximum TRP . You need to change the last part.

— CalifJim

  • too finicky 7 Context - Every other news channels channel has been working against Mr William's news channel TRP so that it is adversely his news channel TRP gets affected , but inspite in spite of all their efforts Mr William came comes out as a the winner.
  • too finicky 7 Williams has taken everyone on single - handedly in the race for getting maximum TRP .
  • You need to change the last part.
  • TRP is the name of a channel, just as Robert is the name of a person.
  • I think you can see that "get maximum Robert" is not possible.
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too finicky 7Context - Every other news channels channel has been working against Mr William's news channel TRP so that it is adversely his news channel TRP gets affected, but inspite
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So let's start over.

too finicky 7Williams has single-handedly taken everyone on in the race for getting to get maximum TRP.

CJ

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