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Anon006 Posted 7 years ago
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Is this okay: Ben is a great coach! His knowledge and experience in football is unmatched. I’ve trained with him a few times and his methods have made me a more complete player. I highly recommend him to anyone prepping for tryouts or combine.
  

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anon006 to anyone prepping for tryouts or combine. Everything is fine until you get to the last word. It doesn't fit.

— CalifJim

  • anon006 to anyone prepping for tryouts or combine.
  • Everything is fine until you get to the last word.
  • It doesn't fit.
  • 'combine' is a verb.
  • You combine one thing with another.
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anon006to anyone prepping for tryouts or combine.

Everything is fine until you get to the last word. It doesn't fit.

'combine' is a verb. You combine one thing with another.

Combine the butter with the flour.

CJ

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I wouldn't like the logic of "more complete".

Better is:

"... have helped me become a better player."

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