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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
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I saw this movie once in a theater and another time on rental. As much as I agree with the inexperienced acting from most of the cast, I can't say that it was poor protrayal of what certain minorities in the US have to go through on a daily basis. I am myself a minority, have been through variations of what happened to each of the protagonists in the movie. Movies in general can either stimulate our creative minds by having us imagine a world beyond what is the norm to our own lives, or sometimes it'll make us feel like viewing a film of our own lives, because it may have happened to our particular self.
So, it's hard to just say that this movie wasn't good or the acting had been sub-par, because have you really experienced or even know that their are parts of America like the one in this movie?
Maybe his emotionless and stoic demeanor was because of his inexperienced acting or maybe it was also because of how nervous he felt working w/ a big name actor or it could've been the anxiety of living in a community surrounded by negativity and needing to deal with it not by choice, but by fate.
I saw this movie once in a theater and another time on rental. As much as I agree with the inexperienced acting from most of the cast, I can't say that it was poor protrayal of what certain minorities in the US have to go through on a daily basis. I am myself a minority, have been through variations of what happened to each of the protagonists in the movie. Movies in general can either stimulate our creative minds by having us imagine a world beyond what is the norm to our own lives, or sometimes it'll make us feel like viewing a film of our own lives, because it may have happened to our particular self.
So, it's hard to just say that this movie wasn't good or the acting had been sub-par, because have you really experienced or even know that their are parts of America like the one in this movie?
Maybe his emotionless and stoic demeanor was because of his inexperienced acting or maybe it was also because of how nervous he felt working w/ a big name actor or it could've been the anxiety of living in a community surrounded by negativity and needing to deal with it not by choice, but by fate.
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I have underlined some problem areas and struck out unnecessary verbiage: I saw this movie once in a theater and another time on rental. As much as I agree with the inexperienced acting from most of the cast, I can't say that it was poor protrayal of what certain minorities in the US have to go through on a daily basis . I am myself a minority, ha ve been through variations of what happened to each of the protagonists in the movie.
- I have underlined some problem areas and struck out unnecessary verbiage: I saw this movie once in a theater and another time on rental.
- As much as I agree with the inexperienced acting from most of the cast, I can't say that it was poor protrayal of what certain minorities in the US have to go through on a daily basis .
- I am myself a minority, ha ve been through variations of what happened to each of the protagonists in the movie.
- Movies in general can either stimulate our creative minds by having us imagine a world beyond what is the norm to our own lives, or sometimes it'll make us feel li ke vie wing a film of our own lives, because it may have happened to our particular self .
- So , it's hard to just say that this movie wasn't good or the acting had been sub-par, because have you really experienced or even know that their are parts of America like the one in this movie?
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I have underlined some problem areas and struck out unnecessary verbiage:
I saw this movieonce in a theater and another time on rental. As much as I agree with the inexperienced acting from most of the cast, I can't say that it was poor protrayal of what certain minorities in the US have to go through on a daily ba
I saw this movie
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I saw this movie in a theater and on rental. As much as I agree with the inexperienced acting from most of the cast, I can't say that it was poor protrayal of what certain minorities in the US have to go through daily. I am a minority and have been through variations of what happened to each of the protagonists in the movie. Movies can either stimulate our creative m
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I saw this movie in a theater and as a rental DVD. As much as I admit the inexperienced acting from most of the cast, I cannot agree that it a poor portrayal of what certain minorities in the US have to go through daily. I am myself a member of a minority and have been through variations of what happened to each of the protagonists in the movie. Movies can eit
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1. I cannot agree that it a poor portrayal of what certain minorities in the US have to go through daily.
Is this sentence grammatically correct?
2. Maybe his emotionless and stoic demeanor is because of his inexperienced acting,
Why is it is when we're talking about both emotionless and stoic demeanor?
3. Final sentence: b
Is this sentence grammatically correct?
2. Maybe his emotionless and stoic demeanor is because of his inexperienced acting,
Why is it is when we're talking about both emotionless and stoic demeanor?
3. Final sentence: b
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1. I cannot agree that it a poor portrayalof what certain minorities in the US have to go through daily. Is this sentence grammatically correct?-- No, my mistake. Please insert 'is' after 'it'.
2. Maybe his emotionless and stoic demeanor is because of his inexperienced acting, Why is it is when we're talking about both emotionless and stoic
2. Maybe his emotionless and stoic demeanor is because of his inexperienced acting, Why is it is when we're talking about both emotionless and stoic
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MIster Micawber,
Too bad I'm not in the land of the rising sun, 'cause then I'd ask you to be my Sensei.
Too bad I'm not in the land of the rising sun, 'cause then I'd ask you to be my Sensei.
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