Returning

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Veris



Returning



Once Ernesto was in front of a kiosk, he saw a colorful rounded sweet in which a clock was drawn. Completely sure that his young grandchildren called Veronica would like it, he bought it.

Absolutely anxious he gave it to her while she was sleeping . it would be a surprise to to see him there, because they didn’t see very often.

So , secretly, nervous and in a tip toe position he leaned over his bed and gave it to her. That situation was what Ernesto looked forward to. On the one hand he wanted to enjoy this time with her but on the other hand he was afraid of let her go and leaf.

But he couldn’t do anything , It was the law of life.

As time went by, Veronica glowed up up and she remembered that time since now on.

Her father buy her sweets, but she can’t forget the taste of the other one.

Her feeling of wanting to taste that sweet again lead her to try if she could find it.

Undoubtly, it will be a way of returning to his grandfather what he had done.

Unfortunately, that rounded sweet with a clock draw was no longer for sale as a salesman said. However, She wasn’t disappoint it and went on to his search.

One day , she was taken aback by a kiosk which had the sweet that she was looking for.



Lots of memories came to her mind, she , as a way of return , leave in her father’s room the colorful rounded sweet with a letter saying “ Once your father gave to me , now it time to return his sweet action “.