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Return my belonings ...

Can I have your comments for the following sentences?

1. Even though my roomate borrowed my personal possessions without my permission, at first, I could stand it because she returned them to me without making any damages. However, now she stills borrows my stuff and sometimes she lose it and even damage it.

2. I know that you are really busy with a lot of works, but I would apprecaite it if you could arrange me a new room in next term.
  

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Hi, Can I have your comments for the following sentences? 1. Even though my roomate borrowed my personal possessions without my permission, at first, I could stand it because she returned them to me without making any damages.

  • Hi, Can I have your comments for the following sentences?
  • 1.
  • Even though my roomate borrowed my personal possessions without my permission, at first, I could stand it because she returned them to me without making any damages.
  • However, now she stills borrows my stuff and sometimes she lose it and even damage it.
  • 2.
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Hi,

Can I have your comments for the following sentences?

1. Even though my roomate borrowed my personal possessions without my permission, at first, I could stand it because she returned them to me without making any damages. However, now she stills borrows my stuff and sometimes she lose it and even damage it.

2. I know that you are
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1. Even though my roomate borrows my personal possessions without my permission, I could accept it initially because she returned them to me undamaged. However, now she sometimes loses or damages them.

2. I know that you are very busy, but I would be grateful if you could arrange a new room for me for the next term.

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