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Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Retain water.
I am trying to paraphrase the underlined part and if you see any problems, let me know. Thanks alot.
Re-alignment of the highway in 1963 completely blocked the former southern outlet of the depression, further enhancing its ability to retain water.
--> In 1963, the rebuilt highway prevented water from draining away from the southern outlet of the downhill slope and as a result, the ability to contain water got more improved.
Re-alignment of the highway in 1963 completely blocked the former southern outlet of the depression, further enhancing its ability to retain water.
--> In 1963, the rebuilt highway prevented water from draining away from the southern outlet of the downhill slope and as a result, the ability to contain water got more improved.
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its ability to retain water was improved. But as Mr. M says, why are you trying to make these changes.
- its ability to retain water was improved.
- But as Mr.
- M says, why are you trying to make these changes.
- The originals are all better.
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... its ability to retain water was improved.
But as Mr. M says, why are you trying to make these changes. The originals are all better.
But as Mr. M says, why are you trying to make these changes. The originals are all better.
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