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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Hello, is this sentence correct ? How would you write the last part better ? Thank you in advance !

Holding a 5+ years' experience in the financial field, I am currently seeking a position in an international environment that will allow me to take on new challenges. My results oriented personality and my trilingual skills are my key strengths.
  

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With over five years of experience in finance, I am currently seeking a position in an international environment that will allow me to take on new challenges. My results-oriented attitude and my tri-lingual skills are my key strengths.

  • With over five years of experience in finance, I am currently seeking a position in an international environment that will allow me to take on new challenges.
  • My results-oriented attitude and my tri-lingual skills are my key strengths.
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With over five years of experience in finance, I am currently seeking a position in an international environment that will allow me to take on new challenges. My results-oriented attitude and my tri-lingual skills are my key strengths.
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Thank you so much for your help, sir.

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