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Newguest Posted 15 years ago
Vocabulary

Resume

Hi

I'd like to ask you about a few points in a CV. It's a CV of a guy who's a computer scientist.

Computer scientist
  • User software administration
  • Network devices and server administration
  • Computer hardware diagnosing and troubleshooting
  • Helping the users with the software issues
  • Writing applications to improve office workers work (.NET, ASP.NET, C#)
  • SQL Server administration.
2004 - 2009 District Court

Secretary
  • Managing/running judge department (It means he was in charge of this department)
  • Information system management based on Lotus platform
Could you tell me what could be improved?
  

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e. Either: software administration hardware diagnosis Or: Administering software Diagnosing hardware

— Mister Micawber

  • e.
  • Either: software administration hardware diagnosis Or: Administering software Diagnosing hardware
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All of the points should be constructed in parallel, i.e.

Either:

software administration

hardware diagnosis

Or:

Administering software

Diagnosing hardware
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Ok, how about this:

Computer scientist
  • User software administration
  • Network devices and server administration
  • Computer hardware diagnosis and troubleshooting
  • Helping the users with the software issues (I think "helping" here is better than "help"? Are the articles correct?)
  • Writing applications to improve
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I changed point 4 into: Helping the users with the problems of IT nature.
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All you did was change the 3rd one to match the first two – and I had already showed you that one. They ALL have to be nominalized.
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When describing work experience in a CV, always use the PAST tense.

  • Developed user friendly software
  • Taught C++ to fellow students
  • Managed the fuzzle department
  • Oversaw the maintence program
  • Kept track of inventory
The only time you do not use the past tense is when you describe
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