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Ajinkya Korade Posted 12 years ago
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restructure below sentence

Can somebody please restructure below sentence in more formal way??
"In the third year I conducted a seminar on “Embedded Zero-Tree Wavelet Based Transform” which is an image compression algorithm. For this, I won the first prize in Intradepartmental Seminar Competition in Image Processing domain. "
  

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Hello, Ajinkya—and welcome to English Forums. It is fine except for two articles: In the third year I conducted a seminar on “Embedded Zero-Tree Wavelet Based Transform”, which is an image compression algorithm. For this, I won the first prize in the Intradepartmental Seminar Competition in the Image Processing domain.

  • Hello, Ajinkya—and welcome to English Forums.
  • It is fine except for two articles: In the third year I conducted a seminar on “Embedded Zero-Tree Wavelet Based Transform”, which is an image compression algorithm.
  • For this, I won the first prize in the Intradepartmental Seminar Competition in the Image Processing domain.
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Hello, Ajinkya—and welcome to English Forums.
It is fine except for two articles:

In the third year I conducted a seminar on “Embedded Zero-Tree Wavelet Based Transform”, which is an image compression algorithm. For this, I won the first prize in the Intradepartmental Seminar Competition in the Image Processing domain.

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