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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Resting quietly

From his apartment there was an amazing view of the city, resting quietly in the night.

Is this OK as it is?

I feel that the last part is a bit too poetic. What could I write instead to make it less poetic without changing the meaning?

  
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