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Martz Posted 16 years ago
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Restaurant review
The "Shakespeare's Head" is definitely the best English pub I've ever eaten at.
It's set in a nice area of London, near Camden Town, neither too quiet nor noisy.
I found the place very comfortable, roomy and airy but, most important thing, the food was delicious and clearly fresh.
Since I went there together with three other friends, we managed to sample different dishes.
All of them had been tasty and so filling that each of us could only eat a main course and a dessert.
If I had to give you an advice on what to order, I'll suggest you eating the meat pies. They're what I liked best.
Also, the beer was pretty good, and the service quick and precise. The waiters were, moreover, really kind.
Unfortunately the kitchen closes very early, at 8:30 pm.
It's truly worthy, but a bit difficult to reach by means of transport. I would therefore especially recommend it to everyone who lives or is staying nearby.
Thanks to everyone who'll help
It's set in a nice area of London, near Camden Town, neither too quiet nor noisy.
I found the place very comfortable, roomy and airy but, most important thing, the food was delicious and clearly fresh.
Since I went there together with three other friends, we managed to sample different dishes.
All of them had been tasty and so filling that each of us could only eat a main course and a dessert.
If I had to give you an advice on what to order, I'll suggest you eating the meat pies. They're what I liked best.
Also, the beer was pretty good, and the service quick and precise. The waiters were, moreover, really kind.
Unfortunately the kitchen closes very early, at 8:30 pm.
It's truly worthy, but a bit difficult to reach by means of transport. I would therefore especially recommend it to everyone who lives or is staying nearby.
Thanks to everyone who'll help
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" * "and the service was quick and precise" (you can't say just "service quick"; service is/was quick) * "Unfortunately , the kitchen closes very early" ("Unfortunately" is an intro phrase and as such should be followed by a comma) Please correct me in case I'm wrong. -- Victor
- " * "and the service was quick and precise" (you can't say just "service quick"; service is/was quick) * "Unfortunately , the kitchen closes very early" ("Unfortunately" is an intro phrase and as such should be followed by a comma) Please correct me in case I'm wrong.
- -- Victor
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Hi,
Here is what I would change in your text:
* "most important thing" -> "most importantly" – just don't like the word "thing"
* "to sample different dishes" -> "to taste different dishes"
* "If I had ..., I'll suggest..." -> "If I had ..., I would suggest..."
* "and the service was quick and precise" (you c
Here is what I would change in your text:
* "most important thing" -> "most importantly" – just don't like the word "thing"
* "to sample different dishes" -> "to taste different dishes"
* "If I had ..., I'll suggest..." -> "If I had ..., I would suggest..."
* "and the service was quick and precise" (you c
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