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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
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Restaurant

It's like African home cooking or something of that sort, because the restaurant is really small and didn't seem like it had much advertising, so I assume most patrons were return customers.

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PreciousJones It's like African home cooking or something of that sort, because the restaurant is really small and didn't seem like it had much advertising, so I assume most patrons were return customers. OK as is. CJ

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  • PreciousJones It's like African home cooking or something of that sort, because the restaurant is really small and didn't seem like it had much advertising, so I assume most patrons were return customers.
  • OK as is.
  • CJ
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PreciousJonesIt's like African home cooking or something of that sort, because the restaurant is really small and didn't seem like it had much advertising, so I assume most patrons were return customers.
OK as is.

CJ
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Thanks CJ,

What about for the last part:

so I assume most patrons are return customers.

How would this change the sentence?
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PreciousJonesWhat about for the last part: so I assume most patrons are return customers. How would this change the sentence?
It would make the comment about return customers more general. As it is, with were, it makes the statement only about your one visit there.

CJ
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