Respond to an email.

Hi, I learn English by myself, so I find it difficult to write an email in English. Could you help me correct my response to check if there is a mistake? thank you.

(I took a course called "Toeic Speaking Writing", so this is the topic of a test)

The topic:

From: Samantha Hawkins
To: Hampton Human Resources
Subject: Positions at Hampton
Sent: August 10,20—
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am interested in applying for a position at Hampton Inc. I recently graduated from the university
and am interested in any openings you may have in your Marketing Department. If you have any
positions open, please let me know what they are and how I can apply.
Thank you.
Samantha Hawkins
Directions: Respond to the e-mail as if you are a human resources officer at Hampton, Inc. In
your e-mail, ask ONE question and give TWO pieces of information

The response: (I wrote the response by myself)

Dear Hawkins:

I am Summer Nguyen, the manager of the Human Resources Department. I am writing to respond to your email. I understand that you are interested in working in our Marketing Department. First of all, we have an open position for a Market Researcher. Second, you can send to us your résumé to apply for this position. I would like to ask you a question. Do you have any experience in that area?

Thank you for your time. Please let me know if you have any questions or any further information. Your prompt reply would be very much appreciated.

Sincerely,

Summer Nguyen, Manager, Human Resources Department