Research Program One-Page Objective Statement

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Hello all

i would extremely appreciate if anyone would help me , i am surprised by the program sudden deadline that it is tomorrow to apply for it .

So the application form contained many things ( CV, English Professionsy Letter , etc .. )

Also a One-Page Objective Statement , which i dont really know how to write it .

They wrote:

One-Page Objective Statement

The one-page objective statement should be single-spaced in 12-point font. The statement must describe your research experience, research interests, clinical interests, professional objectives, and your goals and expectations for this program.

May anyone please check if mines right or helps me edit it ?

Objective statement

Since I was a young learner, I always developed a love toward researching. Through every science fair in high school, researching about scientific and medical subjects/experiments made me thrive for more. Which lead to double my effort in first year of college to prove myself in the medical field researching, I entered a research program that refreshed my basic researching skills and strengthen my weak skills. In that program, I've done a research about Aquagenic Urticaria, also known as water allergy. Being exposed to the medical field as a student made me want more answers about the unknown reason of various disorders and the cure to many more. Hopefully in this program I would like to come out with a perfect research format with all the right aspects and points that may go a long way in documenting a cure and cause for disorders, especially speech and language disorders, which I major in, that’s lot less rich in researches as in any other medical major and speciality. Accomplishing a well documented and trustful data with all of the resources and labs that this program provides is a step toward a successful research and a lot more. Once I'm honored to be accepted in this program I would expect to be able to adapt all the techniques and skills for further researches, also open many doors to more medical answers.

Park banana 521 · Accepted Answer

Can anyone check if this is how to write an objective statement for abroad research course ?

in the application form its says :

One-Page Objective Statement

The one-page objective statement should be single-spaced in 12-point font. The statement must describe your research experience, research interests, clinical interests, professional objectives, and your goals and expectations for this program.

Is it like the CV ? because they already asked for that

Here's what i wrote for my One-Page Objective Statement, can anyone please help edit and check if its right ?

Since I was a young learner, I always developed a love toward researching. Through every science fair in high school, researching about scientific and medical subjects/experiments made me thrive for more. Which lead to double my effort in first year of college to prove myself in the medical field researching, I entered a research program that refreshed my basic researching skills and strengthen my weak skills. In that program, I've done a research about Aquagenic Urticaria, also known as water allergy. Being exposed to the medical field as a student made me want more answers about the unknown reason of various disorders and the cure to many more. Hopefully in this program I would like to come out with a perfect research format with all the right aspects and points that may go a long way in documenting a cure and cause for disorders, especially speech and language disorders, which I major in, that’s lot less rich in researches as in any other medical major and speciality. Accomplishing a well documented and trustful data with all of the resources and labs that this program provides is a step toward a successful research and a lot more. Once I'm honored to be accepted in this program I would expect to be able to adapt all the techniques and skills for further researches, also open many doors to more medical answers.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Your English needs some polishing. I have highlighted some text that needs more work.

Since I was a young learner, I ~~always~~ have developed a love toward researching. Through every science fair in high school, researching about scientific and medical subjects/experiments made me thrive for more. Which lead to double my effort in first year of college to prove myself in the medical field researching, I entered a research program that refreshed my basic researching skills and strengthen my weak skills. In that program, I've done a research about Aquagenic Urticaria, also known as water allergy. (What were your findings?) Being exposed to the medical field as a student made me want more answers about the unknown reason of various disorders and the cure to many more. Hopefully in this program I would like to come out with a perfect research format with all the right aspects and points that may go a long way in documenting a cure and cause for disorders, especially speech and language disorders, which I major in, that’s lot less rich in researches as in any other medical major and speciality. Accomplishing a well documented and trustful data with all of the resources and labs that this program provides is a step toward a successful research and a lot more. Once I'm honored to be accepted in this program I would expect to be able to adapt all the techniques and skills for further researches, also open many doors to more medical answers.

Teechr · Answer

That doesn't work for me at all. What you wrote is mostly waffle, and what you were asked to write was anything but! You need to address each of the following clearly and with specifics:

- your research experience,

- research interests,

- clinical interests,

- professional objectives,

- your goals and expectations for this program.

Get a piece of paper and brainstorm. List all the relevant specific points that come to mind. Then use those as a basis for writing your one-page statement.

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